tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post6341960200765167467..comments2023-11-17T03:52:12.782-05:00Comments on murmurs: BrigadoonSarah Hinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-62636153471356986852008-08-18T22:30:00.000-04:002008-08-18T22:30:00.000-04:00Thanks, Sheri! Yes, this piece was a relief to wri...Thanks, Sheri! Yes, this piece was a relief to write after the last one. And I'm glad to be developing a consistent style that is recognizable to readers. I appreciate your telling me that. :)<BR/><BR/>I'm going to stop by soon, Beth. I will admit to being a bit behind lately.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-2546259679206284002008-08-18T12:32:00.000-04:002008-08-18T12:32:00.000-04:00What sex should be ... hmmm, I'm not like that, I ...What sex should be ... hmmm, I'm not like that, I don't think. I'm more like sexless. Haha.<BR/><BR/>Just checking on you as I haven't seen you in a while.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-30045229104707226282008-08-17T22:42:00.000-04:002008-08-17T22:42:00.000-04:00Well that was a happier version of intimacy then t...Well that was a happier version of intimacy then the last intense posting! Both were undeniably YOU - your writing style is very distinct and clear no matter what you write about.Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-70354928538478440612008-08-17T10:12:00.000-04:002008-08-17T10:12:00.000-04:00Yes, I needed something uplifting after that one, ...Yes, I needed something uplifting after that one, Hotwire. I'm glad you felt the same. <BR/><BR/>Thanks, Charles. This little window was brighter than most. ;)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-73718188179247177922008-08-16T20:42:00.000-04:002008-08-16T20:42:00.000-04:00Very nice. a great glimpse into their love.Very nice. a great glimpse into their love.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-21260120988851504792008-08-16T06:41:00.000-04:002008-08-16T06:41:00.000-04:00a pleasant reprieve from the last (excellent!) pos...a pleasant reprieve from the last (excellent!) post.Steve Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05298219742968828262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-41935800721339880542008-08-14T17:11:00.000-04:002008-08-14T17:11:00.000-04:00Hee-hee. :) I liked that line too, Aine. And good...Hee-hee. :) I liked that line too, Aine. <BR/><BR/>And good point about their differing enthusiasm levels at first. She's clearly the aggressor. But he's easily persuadable. Of course. ;)<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Paul! It was a fun piece to dive into.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-53917429157659003942008-08-14T16:56:00.000-04:002008-08-14T16:56:00.000-04:00Very well done Sarah.Very well done Sarah.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-58505893261571803432008-08-14T16:24:00.000-04:002008-08-14T16:24:00.000-04:00“I think he’s—Jesus—judging me.”Ha! :)Yes, a nice...“I think he’s—Jesus—judging me.”<BR/><BR/>Ha! :)<BR/><BR/>Yes, a nice piece to follow your previous post. I like how you demonstrate two lovers who are coming together from different energy levels (she's a bit more interested in the moment, at first).Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-67558801748271842172008-08-14T12:39:00.000-04:002008-08-14T12:39:00.000-04:00Thanks, Angela. :) I'm glad you came by. Jason, th...Thanks, Angela. :) I'm glad you came by. <BR/><BR/>Jason, that's an interesting observation. I suppose it's impossible to completely bridge that separation. There is something uniquely wonderful in the masculine/feminine distinction here. But the desire to form something new in the space between--or above--yes, that is breathtakingly human. <BR/><BR/>And worth writing about. :)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-267771599273719722008-08-14T09:41:00.000-04:002008-08-14T09:41:00.000-04:00Oooo, very nice. :)But beyond the obvious great t...Oooo, very nice. :)<BR/><BR/>But beyond the obvious great things, there's a unique quality in your character interactions that is quintessentially you. A kind of close distance. They're literally touching, but there is a separation. It brings a poignance, and an excitement, at the same time.<BR/><BR/>That's a distinct draw to your writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-20043056018979746232008-08-14T09:29:00.000-04:002008-08-14T09:29:00.000-04:00oohhhh loveeee!oohhhh loveeee!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-20044454206055685372008-08-14T07:58:00.000-04:002008-08-14T07:58:00.000-04:00Thank you, Lena! In a bizarre way, I meant this as...Thank you, Lena! In a bizarre way, I meant this as a companion piece to my last post. To demonstrate what sex should be. Not taking, but giving, and receiving. A truly shared experience. <BR/><BR/>I'm glad it made you smile! That's what I was hoping for. :)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-31105992817257329012008-08-14T06:11:00.000-04:002008-08-14T06:11:00.000-04:00that was brilliant! Just loved it from the beginni...that was brilliant! Just loved it from the beginning till end.. made me smile how beautiful the scene was.Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.com