tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post8951721436564362497..comments2023-11-17T03:52:12.782-05:00Comments on murmurs: Prometheus Sarah Hinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-86863450601144951422015-08-02T19:34:58.704-04:002015-08-02T19:34:58.704-04:00Raj, thank you again! Darn, how did I miss your co...Raj, thank you again! Darn, how did I miss your comments? :)<br /><br />Aniket, it has been awhile. Not sure why. You've given me something to ponder...<br /><br />Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-82781744841498704722015-08-02T05:43:27.094-04:002015-08-02T05:43:27.094-04:00"I will show you what hot is, " she said..."I will show you what hot is, " she said tracing her fingers in circles on his thighs.<br /><br />Yup, that's the version I'm choosing to remember. It's about time you write something on those lines. Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-7903012993454596232015-04-22T18:27:31.160-04:002015-04-22T18:27:31.160-04:00I like the image of blue fire. I had to look up Pr...I like the image of blue fire. I had to look up Prometheus to find out what you meant. I like the attitude at the end. "I will show you what hot is" that's great. Give it your all... victory :)Raj Davishttp://www.rajscove.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-70174203956488579042015-04-20T09:43:01.226-04:002015-04-20T09:43:01.226-04:00Charles, thanks again.
Mark, poems are my burning...Charles, thanks again.<br /><br />Mark, poems are my burning, I guess. Most of the time, I'm just at a pleasant simmer.<br /><br />Shrinivas, very kind! Thank you. <br /><br />Melissa, well, that makes my day. :)<br /><br />Vesper, thank you! Nothing like a little chemistry-inspired wordplay. Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-16415549657476173692015-04-19T21:52:34.136-04:002015-04-19T21:52:34.136-04:00like a vein
contained
by its ribbon
of skin
I lov...<i>like a vein<br />contained<br />by its ribbon<br />of skin</i><br /><br />I love this and the whole poem!Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-28185532239010170992015-04-18T14:41:39.120-04:002015-04-18T14:41:39.120-04:00Ah, I love your poetry.Ah, I love your poetry.Melissa Sarnohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11215683401795724259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-69012305286797691032015-04-12T09:21:58.846-04:002015-04-12T09:21:58.846-04:00I can feel the heat blazing from your eyes. Very s...I can feel the heat blazing from your eyes. Very sharp poem.Shrinivas Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11249572002116231152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-13115478277134171162015-04-10T06:53:04.647-04:002015-04-10T06:53:04.647-04:00If you really want to burn hot Sarah add plutonium...If you really want to burn hot Sarah add plutonium. I was burning hot for years, looking back I miss the fire but have adapted to the coldness I chose. the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2133579337316674953.post-28404407400683796482015-04-09T22:10:07.328-04:002015-04-09T22:10:07.328-04:00Burn blue. I like that.Burn blue. I like that.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com