She stained his hair
with passion's pulp,
as he teased her knees
with nerves of grass
And like a record
sweetened by its needle,
contact spun them
a crackling song
Berry juice squeezed
from electric thighs,
tiny seeds like gold dust
flecking red tongues
with passion's pulp,
as he teased her knees
with nerves of grass
And like a record
sweetened by its needle,
contact spun them
a crackling song
Berry juice squeezed
from electric thighs,
tiny seeds like gold dust
flecking red tongues
14 comments:
:) expressive
I like that the photo depicts how the joining of pieces creates a whole. As does the passion of the lovers create a song.
Quite a start to the week, Sarah!
;)
I like the use of color here in you descriptions. Very expressive as said above.
Happy Monday!
Vinz, I hope so. :)
Aine, that was the very reason I picked this photo. Thanks for noticing!
I saw this piece as summer's last hurrah...so I wanted to, er, make an impression. ;)
Paul, thank you. It's been awhile since I wrote a poem. Summer's fading made me want to take another stab.
Happy Monday to you, too. :)
When the lightest touch drowns the expanse of the universe.
One of the greatest moments to be human.
a lot of nice images here. Especially love the seed image.
Jason, so true. Those little earthquakes can move mountains, and join hearts.
I need to stop lamenting summer's passing. It's still here, damn it! ;)
Charles, thanks. I think the seed image was my favorite too. I definitely mixed my metaphors here, but it was a fun poem to write.
What a portrayal of passion!The feelings are palpable in your words.
Awesome :)
sexy poem :)
every word right on mark.
loved reading.
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Sameera, I'm glad the passion rang true for you. Thanks. :)
Nothingman, a little suggestive, yes. ;)
I'm glad you popped in!
Wow is it me or was that incredibly sexy? ;o)
that was quite a passion here! Loved it :)
Ello, you're always sexy. ;)
Lena, thanks! I like putting it on the line every now and then. :)
Berry juice squeezed
from electric thighs,
tiny seeds like gold dust
flecking red tongues
Excellent, Sarah!
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