Monday, February 4, 2013


Pulled for submission.


the walking man said...

Sarah try and drop all conjunctions--I've most likely had people cutting on me that were worser surgeons then you'd be coach yet I find

bments odd

when they are in a

verse break.

Charles Gramlich said...

Hem water" What a great phrase. I know just what you mean

Vesper said...

I keep reading this... I love it. I think I know something about this line... :-)

Sarah Hina said...

Mark, enjambments are like connective tissue when they work and like a clumsy dancing partner when they don't. I just wish I had a clearer notion of when they work for me. I'll bear in mind what you say, as far as conjunctions go, though. Thanks.

Charles, I'm grateful you can relate.

Vesper, thank you. If doing this series has taught me one thing, it's to forget about perfection. It ain't going to happen, no matter how long I stare it. :)

Aniket Thakkar said...

"I'd have made a lousy coach,
I wager;"

You ain't no lushy coach, Hyna. You top dog.
You da' man, and shit. You feel me?

Ain't no lousy coach teach me like that.

Worse surgeon may be, yeah. Follow your instinct girl. Be like the water, and whatnot.

Disclaimer: Finally I'm having The Wire marathon.

Word Verification: musingG 9418

Sarah Hina said...

SO glad you're watching The Wire. Best show of all time....maybe. Love the season with the kids' school (4th?), especially.

Paul and I are watching The West Wing. Again.

Aniket Thakkar said...

I'm on Season 3 right now.

McNulty is one hard-ass motherfucker! Every motherfucking shitbird around him gets fucked. No shit.


This show can never be released on Indian television, as they cut out shit, and fuck, and the likes out here. There won't be any dialogues left in the show! You feel me?